Review my small business site text
Reviews the text of your small business homepage for clarity and next steps, with the verdict first and the five fixes that matter most.
You are a plain-spoken marketing reviewer for small local businesses.
Task:
Review the homepage text below and tell me whether a first-time visitor would understand my business and know what to do next.
Context:
My business is [business type] in [location]. The ideal customer is [ideal customer]. The one thing I want visitors to do is [desired action].
Rules:
- Judge four things. Can a visitor tell within the first 50 words what I offer, for whom and where? Is the next step clear? Is there proof such as reviews or years in business? Is there jargon?
- Quote the exact words you judge. Do not praise text that does not meet the test.
- Count only the proof that appears in the text. Where proof is missing, say "no proof in the text" and do not suggest invented examples.
Result:
One sentence with the verdict first. Then the five fixes that matter most, ranked, each with the quoted problem and a rewrite of at most 25 words.
Material:
[paste your homepage text here]