Rewrite a draft in my own voice
Rewrites your draft so it sounds like you, keeps every fact, number and name, and lists what it changed most.
Task:
Rewrite the draft below so it sounds like me, without changing what it says.
Context:
The draft is for [audience] and will be used as [where it will be used]. My voice is [describe your voice, for example direct, short sentences, dry humor].
Rules:
- Keep every fact, number and name from the draft.
- Cut filler phrases and generic openings.
- Use plain words I would say out loud.
- Where you are unsure whether a change keeps the meaning, leave the sentence as it is and mention it in the note.
Result:
The rewritten text first. Then a short note of up to five points on what you changed most and what you left alone.
Material:
[paste your draft here]